Design Thinking: Refining It

Just before I left C21 today, I realized that my HMW was not exactly what I hope to experiment with and it bothered me quite a bit hence I am still working on it after our session today. After a bit of reflecting, some help from Flint and also listening to each others ideas and thought today I have decided to revised my HMW two more times. I know it still isn’t perfect and I may have included too much information and need to narrow things down. Please share any suggestions.