{"id":86,"date":"2014-12-02T00:47:48","date_gmt":"2014-12-02T00:47:48","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/?p=86"},"modified":"2015-09-18T13:15:49","modified_gmt":"2015-09-18T13:15:49","slug":"a-teacher-inquiry-project-on-making-feedback-visible","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/2014\/12\/02\/a-teacher-inquiry-project-on-making-feedback-visible\/","title":{"rendered":"A Teacher Inquiry Trajectory on Making Feedback Visible"},"content":{"rendered":"<h3>Introduction<\/h3>\n<p>As teachers, we provide feedback to students all the time. If you have ever wondered exactly why we do it, what makes feedback effective, and which method is the best ways to provide it, you\u2019re not alone.<\/p>\n<p>David and Adam wondered about these questions and decided to undertake an arc of inquiry to investigate the answers. This blog post describes their process and some of the resources they recommend if you would like to explore this topic yourself.<\/p>\n<h3>Background<\/h3>\n<p>Providing feedback is one of the most effective instructional strategies a teacher can use to help their students learn.<\/p>\n<p>As David has <a href=\"http:\/\/theinquisitiveteacher.weebly.com\/blog\/november-10th-2014\" target=\"_blank\">previously written<\/a>, effective teacher feedback, according to renowned educational researcher John Hattie, can double the \u201crate of learning\u201d among students (Hattie 2012).<\/p>\n<p>As well, John Marzano, in his meta-analysis of teaching strategies and their impact on learning, attributes an <a href=\"http:\/\/soltreemrls3.s3-website-us-west-2.amazonaws.com\/marzanoresearch.com\/media\/documents\/pdf\/AppendixB_DTLGO.pdf\" target=\"_blank\">effect size<\/a>\u00a0of .61 to the tool of Setting Goals & Providing Feedback, which means that his meta-analysis shows that receiving feedback contributes to a 23% gain for those students in the 50th percentile, compared to those students who are not provided with feedback at all (Marzano 2001).<\/p>\n<p>Feedback comes in many forms, and David and Adam decided to inquire about two modes of delivery: Digital-Typewritten and Digital-Verbal.<\/p>\n<p>The following two research questions were developed:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>What type of digital feedback \u2013 typewritten or verbally recorded \u2013\u00a0most benefits students\u2019 essay writing for Geography?<\/li>\n<li>In what ways does the digital recording of written and verbal feedback to students clarify understanding of the feedback?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3>Trajectory<\/h3>\n<p>In a grade 11 geography class of 11 students, David and his students progressed through these phases:<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px\"><a href=\"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/wp-content\/blogs.dir\/17\/files\/2014\/12\/Trajectory.jpeg\" target=\"_blank\"><img fetchpriority=\"high\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-92 \" src=\"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/wp-content\/blogs.dir\/17\/files\/2014\/12\/Trajectory.jpeg\" alt=\"Trajectory\" width=\"499\" height=\"374\" srcset=\"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/files\/2014\/12\/Trajectory.jpeg 1024w, https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/files\/2014\/12\/Trajectory-300x225.jpeg 300w, https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/files\/2014\/12\/Trajectory-400x300.jpeg 400w, https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/files\/2014\/12\/Trajectory-100x75.jpeg 100w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 499px) 100vw, 499px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>The trajectory\u00a0begins with a preliminary <a href=\"https:\/\/docs.google.com\/a\/scs.on.ca\/forms\/d\/1vr43ueWI0o9dGqSV6CZVZzTHhPVmkELmOfGUril-t2A\/viewform\" target=\"_blank\">survey<\/a> to gather baseline information on students\u2019 prior experience receiving feedback.<\/p>\n<p>Students receive an essay assignment at the outset of the course. Over the course of the year, students will complete four essays, two during the first term and one each the subsequent two academic terms. The first paper is formative in nature (assessment for learning) and graded <a href=\"https:\/\/drive.google.com\/file\/d\/0B8m0qsTnwho5cmNsSVFzQmpHdW8\/view?usp=sharing\" target=\"_blank\">according to a rubric <\/a>which includes criteria across levels in\u00a0all four of the achievement categories.<\/p>\n<p><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright\" src=\"http:\/\/3.bp.blogspot.com\/-oU0yILSDrZI\/UjCNaI1l3uI\/AAAAAAAACQQ\/85qfVVLmXnY\/s320\/kaizena_logo_vertical_green.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"159\" height=\"129\" \/>In addition, students receive specific descriptive feedback in one of two digital formats; verbal or typewritten. The typewritten feedback is attached using the commenting\/review feature of a word processor. The verbal feedback is recorded online using a digital tool called <a href=\"http:\/\/blog.kaizena.com\/\" target=\"_blank\">Kaizena<\/a>, which enables teachers to provide students with asynchronous, verbal feedback that is embedded within context of the student\u2019s digital submission. For typewritten feedback, files and links may be shared or passed back and forth. For verbal feedback, it is important for teachers and students to each add both the <a href=\"https:\/\/chrome.google.com\/webstore\/detail\/kaizena-mini\/kfcmpbkmmdlcnepmeojihblcllopielg?hl=en\" target=\"_blank\">Kaizena Mini Add-on<\/a> for Google Docs and the <a href=\"https:\/\/chrome.google.com\/webstore\/detail\/kaizena-plugin\/lpegkbfchjmbpddjkipbplohmkjemnda?hl=en\" target=\"_blank\">Kaizena Plug-In<\/a> for Chrome.<\/p>\n<h3>Resources for Feedback and Reflection<\/h3>\n<p>In addition to the above Essay Rubric and Feedback Tutorials, <a href=\"https:\/\/docs.google.com\/a\/scs.on.ca\/forms\/d\/1b4bNP8hjv4BgNKxoj1PaYK_w97Z4ldxNmcPbmvkg5D0\/viewform\" target=\"_blank\">this survey<\/a> was developed to solicit insights from students\u00a0regarding their perceptions of the impact\u00a0of the feedback on their essays and about their learning preferences for\u00a0the two modes of the feedback delivery.<\/p>\n<p>As the term advances\u00a0and students\u00a0progress through the project, there will be opportunities to reflect on what is\u00a0learned about these instances of feedback. Information from the students will inform these conclusions and an interview can posted here between David and Adam.<\/p>\n<p>Here is a recording of our thoughts on the process to date.<\/p>\n<h3>Global Education Community Offering<\/h3>\n<p>If you would like to experience\u00a0receiving feedback in a digital-verbal format using Kaizena, David and Adam\u00a0would be happy to support you. Simply leave a note\u00a0in the comments,\u00a0below, with a link to a Google Doc that you create. Respond with\u00a0the following prompts in that document, and they\u00a0will request to share it and connect with you.<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>One thing I really like that about this post \/ this idea is\u2026<\/li>\n<li>After reading this trajectory post, I wonder\u2026<\/li>\n<li>I anticipate that digital-verbal feedback will be very effective for some students because\u2026<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"text-align: left\"><a href=\"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/wp-content\/blogs.dir\/17\/files\/2014\/12\/RemoteSnap201.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-99 size-medium\" src=\"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/wp-content\/blogs.dir\/17\/files\/2014\/12\/RemoteSnap201-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"Looking Forward to Connecting!\" width=\"300\" height=\"225\" srcset=\"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/files\/2014\/12\/RemoteSnap201-300x225.jpg 300w, https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/files\/2014\/12\/RemoteSnap201-1024x768.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/files\/2014\/12\/RemoteSnap201-400x300.jpg 400w, https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/files\/2014\/12\/RemoteSnap201-100x75.jpg 100w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p><em>This post appears on the Cohort21 Network in support of coursework completed for\u00a0the UOIT Integration of Information and Computer Technology Into the Classroom AQ Part 1. <\/em><\/p>\n<p>\u00a0<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Introduction As teachers, we provide feedback to students all the time. If you have ever wondered exactly why we do it, what makes feedback effective, and which method is the best ways to provide it, you\u2019re not alone. David and Adam wondered about these questions and decided to undertake an arc of inquiry to investigate &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/2014\/12\/02\/a-teacher-inquiry-project-on-making-feedback-visible\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;A Teacher Inquiry Trajectory on Making Feedback Visible&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":24,"featured_media":92,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"wds_primary_category":0,"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[6,5,7,8],"class_list":["post-86","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-uncategorized","tag-essay","tag-feedback","tag-kaizena","tag-teacher-inquiry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/86","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/24"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=86"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/86\/revisions"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/92"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=86"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=86"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/cohort21.com\/adamcaplan\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=86"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}